MY CASE FOR BETTER PROOFREADING
Read both entries below very carefully and explain why more proofreading is necessary.
Also explain the inconsistency in one of the entries.
Make the necessary corrections.
“We are very glad that they here and I think you just need to understand the event and see what it does to a community to understand how important it is.”
Mary Caton, quoting Mayor Eddie Francis, “Encore on the table”, The Windsor Star, Thursday, August 25, 2011.
“On April 17 that year, Major Harry Schmidt and Maj. Bill Iambic mistaken a Canadian drill for enemy fire and dropped a laser-guided bomb on the unsuspecting soldiers.”
Jordan Press, Postmedia News, “Canada’s Afghan exit final, U. S. finds”, The Windsor Star, Thursday, August 25, 2011.
The word for today is “limpid”.
What part of speech is “limpid”?
Define “limpid” and use it in a sentence that demonstrates its use.