WHO IS THE MORON WHO PENNED THIS HIDEOUSLY CONSTRUCTED STORY?
Does anyone ever edit or check these articles for correctness? Does anyone care about composition? Do newspaper writers ever read their own slop to find potential errors? Do they even have an inkling of what constitutes proper grammar? Do they have any pride in doing a good job? Do they even care?
Find, identify and fix the errors in this example.
“Two Windsor men are facing charges following a brawl at a Highway 401 service centre in Tilbury. Ontario Provincial Police said officers responded to reports of an assault at the eastbound Tilbury ONroute Service Centre on Dec. 5 around 6:30 a.m. Officers determined an assault took place between three men, resulting in a 48-year-old Windsor man being sent to hospital with non-life threatening injuries. A 26-year-old Windsor man was arrested and charged with aggravated assault. A 27-yearold Windsor man was arrested and charged with aggravated assault and two counts of breach of probation. Both men being held in custody pending a bail hearing. OPP said the investigation is continuing.”
“Brawling Windsor men charged”, in the Regional Shorts section of the Windsor Star, Wednesday, December 7, 2016.